VINISH CHANDRAN
2 min readSep 28, 2021

Which headline do you vote for? 60% gives the wrong answer…

Hey there,

I know you’re thinking-this headline is click-bait.

And the reason you’re reading this would be-

You want to what 60% of people can’t answer

Or you trust me… Just kidding!

If you’ve read my previous post, they were all about headlines.

So let’s test what you have learned so far.

So here are the two headlines examples. A1 and A2 and B1 and B2.

  • You have to vote which one is best between A1 and A2
  • And B1 and B2.

A-1

Illustration: No illustration

Headline:

To a $25,000 man or woman who would like to be making $50,000

Offer:

Free booklet: “ What an Executive Should Know.”

A-2

Illustration: Picture of a man reading booklet

Headline:

Here’s proof that this training pays financially?

Offer:

Free booklet: “ What an Executive Should Know.”

B-1

Illustration: Man pointing his finger at another man’s blad head

Headline: “60 days ago they called me ‘Baldy’”

Copy Plot:

The copy tells the story of a man who got

excellent result from the hair-growing remedy.

Offer: Free book, “The New Way to Grow Hair.”

B-2

Illustration: Hair specialist offering a bank check to the reader

Headline: If I can’t grow hair for you in 30 days you get this check

Copy Plot: The copy explains that the check you get is your money back refund in case you are not satisfied with the results from the hair-growth treatments.

Offer: Free book, “The New Way to Grow Hair.”

Let me know which headline you vote for.

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